Saturday, September 26, 2009

Continuing with my book

Devoux has planted a bomb on "The Family Dunne" but before it goes off Dr. Dunne realizes her daughter is not around. They hear a splash and realize she jumped into the sea. Jake jumps in after and saves her from committing suicide. After they get on ship they realize that a plug is missing from the engine room and this is causing the boat to take on water. This sabbotage was also done by Devoux. Jake fixes the ship but half of it is under water. The next morning Devoux checks the GPS and realizes the boat is still moving. Meanwhile, the Dunne family is starting to bond and Uncle jake throws the kids in the water in a playfull romp. Dr. Dunne jumps in with them, suddenly the boat explodes with Jake on it. Meanwhile Dr. Dunnes new husband shows up to a door. When it opens there is a young beautiful woman waiting for him. They embrace and he picks her up and moves her to the bedroom where he explains, I'm finally free.
******to be continued******

2 comments:

  1. Ooh, what is next? I am very interested in your story. Is this mystery or adventure or drama?
    I will check this out what is going on here some other time. The phrase "To be continued" makes me wonder how the story will proceed. Have a good day, and see you in class.

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  2. Oh wow, that's quite dramatic! A broken family decides to piece themselves back together. It's quite common where the families are broken up but very uncommon for families to come back together. I can testify that it does take every member of the family to desire the unity.

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